>Poorly mixed colours, quite 'muddy' looking in parts.
>Plain face, but still somehow overworked compared to the rest of the painting.
>The swallows are a very poor attempt at symbolism..
>Shapeless dress.
>Shapeless girl.
>Awkward pose.
>Artist has clearly spent most of their career learning to draw daisies, but this is the clear limit of their talent at this time.
>Isn't modelled on Lizzie, Effie or Jane, which would have at least given it some Pre-Raph cred.
>His later Ophelias are much better, but the models are ugly as sin.