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103616 No.1   [Reply]

I built a ship with my own hands to take us to the moon,
I took a pen in my own hand and wrote you a hundred tunes.
Now I'm crazy for you but not that crazy.

I pretended you were Jesus you were just dying to save me.
I stood beneath your window with my ukelele.
I made a yard a playground just in case we had a baby.
Now I'm crazy for you but not that crazy.

I treated you like radium. I treated you like God.
You were my glass menagerie, did you not find that odd.
I dwelt within and went without and broke my virgin flesh.
I performed acts of devotion as if you were Ganesh, but now
I'm crazy for you but not that crazy. I'm crazy for you but not that crazy.

>> No.2  
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Her hand in the darkness
I follow for so long
your voice in my ear
carry me back home
wishing you'd consider
a change of heart
but all are so bitter
and we will never stop
we will never stop...

A light in the darkness
been dreaming for so long
searching for a witness
or means to carry on
sweet talk for hours
'bout things we're gonna' do
and sometimes I lose track of my heart
but this could never work out oh ohh

Never stop
we will never stop...

We will never stop...

Her hand in the darkness
follow for so long
your voice in my ear
help me back home
why won't you consider?
a change of heart...

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We've grown
Should've known
All alone
We wake

Full of fire
Remembering how
And now am I awake

I hear the warnings on the wing
I don't believe in anything

Kept inside
Afraid to rise
Foolish pride
We wait

Off the trail
We eat our tails
I can't fail
I wait
And wait

I hear the warnings on the wing
I don't believe in anything
I hear the voices rise and sing
But I don't believe in anything

Used to
Believe in you
Yet all we do
Is wait

  htda - on the wing

(not sure if it's entirely right)

>> No.4  

>>1
At first I assumed I was reading some original poetry and thought (apart from some scanning problems) it was neat enough. But apparently it's just some song lyrics.
I appreciate it might have a special meaning to you, but I can't help but wonder: Is that really the be-all and end-all of creative inspiration you derive from her existence ?
Or is there a host of original poetry lurking in the back of your mind that you're afraid of posting and having it ridiculed ?

If so, man up and post it anyway. It's an anonymous troll-filled place, so ridicule is basically a given. But knowing it is, it's easy to discard such replies as nothing more than that; idiot venom.

Also don't take it too personal. I guess it goes more or less for most of the genuine people in here (including me), to get off their lazy asses and do something original to pay some proper respect and devotion to her loving grace.

>> No.5  

>>4
Why post it here? Is contributing to a public forum the most appropriate way to show your devotion to her? I (personally) find the best, most intimate way is not.

>> No.6  

>>4
stop with the bad vibes


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