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At first I assumed I was reading some original poetry and thought (apart from some scanning problems) it was neat enough. But apparently it's just some song lyrics.
I appreciate it might have a special meaning to you, but I can't help but wonder: Is that really the be-all and end-all of creative inspiration you derive from her existence ?
Or is there a host of original poetry lurking in the back of your mind that you're afraid of posting and having it ridiculed ?
If so, man up and post it anyway. It's an anonymous troll-filled place, so ridicule is basically a given. But knowing it is, it's easy to discard such replies as nothing more than that; idiot venom.
Also don't take it too personal. I guess it goes more or less for most of the genuine people in here (including me), to get off their lazy asses and do something original to pay some proper respect and devotion to her loving grace.